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you bare your muscles,
threaded in tight knots, bundled  
but beautiful, yours

like those fibrous eyes,
irises in maple coils
unwinding me, as

unkempt synapses.
a glance inside your lovely
skin, bones, nerves, I'd like

to press your pleasure
points, to scrape against your thighs,
my fingers trembling,

the dimples on your
shoulders, enzymes, waiting for
an induced fit, mine,

thumbs brushing your hips,
lips lain softly twixt your veins,
a complex of us,

your latticed, protein-
laden pulchritude, pleated,
folded into sheets,

await just one touch.
:iconprojectdfc: Day 17! There's a lot more to this piece, actually. I may or may not post it later. I don't know. Possibly.

Anywho, I took out part of it as a haiku.

[Jan 19, 2013] EDIT: I added the rest, for those who view it from this point onward.

[Feb 12, 2013] EDIT: Holy crap, guys. A DD. This is an enormous honor. After about 5 years on dA, I was starting to think I'd never get one! XD Many, many, MANY thanks to Maddie (*intricately-ordinary) and ^thorns!
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A+P by ~Bluezbreakr ( Suggested by intricately-ordinary and Featured by thorns )
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally thought of the "latticed, protein-laden pulchritude" as the hymen/virginity. No idea if I'm right, but if so, that was brilliant.
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KotarosLover Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh goodness....i love it! :)
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Bluezbreakr Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
Thank you very much! :D
For the fav as well!
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KotarosLover Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:) you're welcome, hon.
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DeathByCelloCase Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy shit. The wording is so lovely!
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Bluezbreakr Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Thank you :heart:
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Euxiom Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Nice work, very nice work. :nod:
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Bluezbreakr Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Thank you very much! ^_^
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graphiteforlunch Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist
Good heavens, this is beautiful. This does homage to the true complex beauty of the human body more than most anything else I've read. It appreciates the lover's body on a deeper level than simply the skin; I find myself thinking like this sometimes with my own lover. Congrats on a well deserved DD, and I am adding you to my watch list for sure!
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Bluezbreakr Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
This is easily one of the best comments I've gotten so far! :tighthug: Thank you sooo much! :D
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